ext_31761 ([identity profile] zzanthalinn.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] tari_roo 2011-02-27 10:44 am (UTC)

I worked in Manoa at UH for sixteen years: it *was* Roundtop Drive, definitely not the Pali Highway... I was laughing a lot at that bit.

Great story! captured the voices well, and I liked the pulmonary edema as a ticking time bomb. This would make a good episode...

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